Patrick

31 July My goal is to get better at my writing by practising my sentences I achieved my goal because I wrote A big story of some old creepy hands.and I wrote some good sentences. 2 August This week I learnt how to do A papier mache mask. I have achieved my goal because learnt were my finger spaces.

8 August This is the beginning of my kerpoof story - have a look. http://www.kerpoof.com/#view?s=2gs11cnx2Mo3c0h2-c-3e40c7-x 16 August to sit nicely on the mat. 4.9.2012 to do better punctuation.

24.9.12 The biggest thing I've learnt this year so far in writing is making sure that I have fullstops at the end of my sentences and have Capital letters at the start of my sentences because at the start of the year I lacked doing fullstops and Capital letters.

27.9. The thing I am proud of is writing because I learnt to proof read my work. I can go back and check if my writing makes sense and make it better if I can.

28.9.2012 My goal for next term is to focus on my writing and make sure that I used the right punctuation.

Friday 9th November My WALT is...Use appropriate word choices to create impact. I have just started my WALT. But I will zoom through it like a rocket.

20.11. 2012. I scoffed down my morning tea.So I could go and see the eels. first walked out to the bush walk. second we went to the swan pond.

7.12.12  the best thing I did for my learning this year was...doing my maths. It makes me confident to do big maths equations.